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Gary R. Eddings's avatar

I'm sure the wine was served in sparkling crystal; and the photographer's spit-take was equally memorable. 😅

Jenny Jordan's avatar

I’m realizing that a fun part of writing very short fiction is that readers’ minds get to fill in the rest of the details!

Gary R. Eddings's avatar

So true - our ability to construct possibilities may well be the trait which allowed our distant ancestors to avoid being a cheetah's lunch😅.

I'm awake at 3:50am watching a skunk crash a pool party of a family of five raccoons at my tiny backyard pond; I've been imagining dialog.

Jenne Mundy - CatProfiler's avatar

Thank you for this!!

Jenny Jordan's avatar

My in house editor says I need to make a few more things clear in it. Work in progress, I guess!

Jenne Mundy - CatProfiler's avatar

Your names are brilliant as ever 😹

Fran B.'s avatar

You got me! It took me 2 readings to realize this was fiction. Write on!

Cindy's avatar

I found myself equally yikes and yuck, with a side order of huh? as a garnish… nonetheless intrigued. 🙂

Jenny Jordan's avatar

I think I maybe rushed it to publication!